100 words on: Clarity. Do people know what you do?
“Kirk, we read these 100 words, but what do you do – exactly?”

OK, that smarted.
Then we wondered: How can businesses avoid being inward-focused self-referential when marketing themselves?
- Be Clear – be concise. We read by scanning, think in sound bites and write with tweets. Marketing ‘targeted solutions’ with a dense 6-panel brochure or a
website with 12 options isn’t targeted.
- Be Clear – avoid jargon. Explain what you mean. DRIPs can be dividend or direct-mail programs. VPVH – ‘viewers-per-viewing-household’ confused even our CMO friends. And, they’re chief marketing officers – not chief merchandising officers.
- Be Clear – deliver specific benefits. Generalities tempt, but ‘easy and
elegant’ could apply to an algebra proof, a casserole or – yes, a hotel. Does
‘providing intelligent cost solutions’ mean anything? Or just sound good? Why not say: ‘We deliver cost savings. Guaranteed.’
Back to me, I’m a ‘marketing troubleshooter with a creative bent.’ Hope that’s clear.
